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WEST - 'Versions' step 2

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WEST: Versions Step #1

I wanted to make something that played around with the inverted style and shapes, this is somewhat similar to "transmission" but at the same time is very different.

I've gotten suggestions on adding colour but that's not really what bothers me. Your comments/suggestions will help me move on and see whether or not what I think needs work is noticeable enough to be mentioned.

So, which version?

UPDATE

Step #2

Thank you guys for your suggestions, I went back to the drawing board and made a few changes.
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I am going to be evil and say I like the 2nd one more, because I like how the diagonal things are going towards him giving West a more main focal point. It draws the eye into the picture. I don't think you need to add color though, I think it is fine just in a b/w scale. I really love how your style is developing though, it is lovely.

And in your transmission blend remember how you inverted her eye and it looked all awesome, maybe you should do that to the side of his face or something? Though not the eyes, because I really admire how the light hits his glasses. I think it is creative whatever you do!